LO4: Subediting

Attached is a screenshot of the body copy for the double page spread on product reviews/ showcase which has been peer assessed, the strengths and weaknesses are as follows:
The grammar is very good and it is written well. It is detailed and has good descriptions about the products.  Good use of words to describe the product and to make people want to buy.

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Add photos of the products along side the information.

As a result of this feedback i plan to revise the body copy and ensure it makes grammatical sense and is relevant to the product and audience.